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# Style notes 9: Nov 27 2008
3:32PM GMT 27 Nov 2008
Dear Colleagues
I know that in these classless times, with socialism red in tooth and claw
once more on the rampage, correct forms of address can seem rather a bore.
However, yet again we have had a Lady given her wrong title, and this is
starting to become irritating. Let me be precise. The wife of a knight, a
baronet, or a peer of any degree except a dukedom is Lady Bloggs. Lady Sarah
Bloggs must be the daughter of an earl, a marquess or a duke. Perhaps you
should recite this in the small hours in order to help induce sleep. We also
noted the other day that a knight had been ennobled thanks to his knighthood.
A knighthood does not confer nobility on the recipient: only a peerage can do
that.
For search engine purposes we have started to call Bombay "Mumbai" on the
internet. In the paper this should remain Bombay, following style. There are
many reasons for this, not the least of which being that if we were to have a
standard of using local names for cities we should have to write about
Firenze, Milano, Roma, and heaven knows what when it comes to Poland and
various parts of the former Soviet empire.
Favourite among this week's literals was someone appearing on a "shat show".
It is a matter of taste whether the initial consonant, or the vowel, was
wrong. The verbs forego and forgo (the style book will tell you the
difference) do not require an "e" at the end. We also managed to write "focal"
where we meant "vocal". Other literals seemed to highlight our difficulties
with geography. There is apparently a benighted African country called
Solamlia, and a place in California called Beverley Hills, where no doubt the
actress Meryl Steep lives. The less said about Boris Johnson's plans "to cut
red rape", the better.
Can I remind you about the difference between practice as a noun and practise
as a verb? Also, there is quite a difference between affecting and effecting
something. We might try to master the difference between something that is
straitened, and something that is straightened; and between an omission and an
admission. Also, please note that "rubbish" is not an adjective, and that
"neither" takes a singular verb. Since we do not yet live in America we appeal
against a verdict, we do not appeal it.
There have been some interesting factual errors. One or two of our Mormon
readers complained that we did not correctly refer to the Church of Jesus
Christ of Latter Day Saints, but left the Son of God out of the title. Please
refrain from doing that in future. We put the village where a young girl had
died in Suffolk when it was in Sussex, which caused more distress to some of
her friends. We confused Tangiers with Tierra del Fuego, putting the former at
the point where the Pacific and Atlantic meet; no O level geography there
either. We confused inches and centimetres in talking of snowfall: our readers
much prefer inches, so stick to them as prescribed in the style book. We also
managed to confuse a temperature of 21 degrees Fahrenheit with one of -21
degrees Fahrenheit, which is when polar bears start roaming. We also confused
amyl nitrate, an additive to diesel, with amyl nitrite, a recreational drug
for the oversexed. I am told the former is quite definitely an appetite
suppressant.
Can we please avoid promiscuous use of the adjective "brilliant" to describe
various aspects of our output? It is very tabloid, and the readers will be the
judge of whether something is brilliant or not.
There are still a few dictionaries left if anyone wants one. Please email Emma
Hartley, the style book editor.
Yours ever
Simon Heffer
Associate Editor
The Daily Telegraph
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