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# Style notes 10: Dec 12 2008
3:34PM GMT 09 Dec 2008
Dear Colleague
Forgive the interruption in normal service: I took the liberty of having a
short holiday. Also, the observant among you will have noticed that the last
two Notes have both been number 8. The last should have been number 9. I only
ever claimed to be literate, not numerate. Should you encounter a Style Notes
No 9 it is an elaborate forgery.
One or two distressing errors have appeared since I last wrote, and they
exemplify the importance of making sure we know what we are talking about. We
gave the impression last week that a bullock grows into a bull. It doesn't. A
bullock is a castrated bull, not a small one. The bullock concerned was called
Field Marshal, which we managed to spell "Field Marshall", an error pointed
out in an email to me from a man who described himself as a retired
lieutenant-kernal. We also managed to publish a list of the 100 greatest
living geniuses, three of whom were in fact dead. Worst of all, the man who
was listed at number one was among them.
Then there were some elementary grammatical errors. Criteria is a plural noun,
not a singular. Adverbs, to which some of you remain notably resistant, and
not adjectives are needed to qualify verbs. We wrote "the economy shrank
steeper than expected" when it in fact shrank more steeply. We seem to get
confused by plural nouns and the verbs they need. There was, though, no excuse
for "the chances of winning has already fallen" or for "the potential for
conflicts of interest are immense". Talking of confusion, we also had "Patrice
Evra was is considering an appeal". It really doesn't take that long to read
something back properly.
Please note - and it is merely a question of logic - that you cannot centre
around something, you only centre upon it. Also, it was probably unfortunate
to describe would-be shoe bombers as having "cold feet". On the subject of
hackneyed usages, we seem to be doing a lot of "soaring" at the moment, and
making the tabloid substitution "terror" for terrorism.
Pastime has only one "s" in it. Southend is in Essex, not Sussex. Tires are
only found on American cars. There is a town in the Auvergne called Clermont-
Ferrand, but none called Clairement-Ferrand. Roy Keane had a reign as
Sunderland manager, not a rein, which is a different sport altogether. Four is
a number; for is a preposition. Finally, and more seriously, there were no
Polish concentration camps. There were camps run by the Nazis that were
situated in Poland.
With best wishes
Simon Heffer
Associate Editor
The Daily Telegraph
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